Persuasive Writing
By Emma
Topic:
Laptops
Have you ever
imagined being able to keep your own laptop? It would be good for schools to
let children keep a laptop so they can access all their work at home. I think
this would be a great idea!
I think all students grade 5 and up should be able to
keep a laptop to catch
up on assignments that can only be accessed through the student’s computer.
This opportunity would be best for family’s who don’t have a computer that is
able to access the students work. This would also be good because the teacher
can access the students work and see how much they have gotten done at home.
This would also be good for students because they
could practice typing over the weekend to get prepared for harder and more
detailed writing. The more a student practices there writing the faster they
will type and the more they practice the more detailed there writing will
become.
The last reason is this allows students to research facts
for assignments. The fastest way for a student to research facts is through the
internet. If students research facts on the internet it will take them 20
minutes. If students have to look up facts though books it will take them 1
hour.
I think giving students a laptop is a great idea.
Students could finish assignments at home that can only be accessed through the
schools network. It would be good for students to practice typing. It would
also be for students to look up facts.
Kiera
Topic: Halloween costumes
Hi my name is Kiera and I want to talk about wearing
are costumes for this year’s Halloween.
Have you ever seen your faces when we wear are costumes? A lot of kids
love wear their costumes. It is really fun and we are
telling you that we love to wear
your costumes. I think it is a
really good idea to where our costumes!!!
Teachers always say that we always should be creative
with everything. We love being creative
with your costumes. It is fun to have
costumes to wear at
school. Kids and adults love to dress
up. A lot of kids love Halloween.
It is fun to wear our costumes to school and we get to
scare your teacher. Every year I see
smile in everyone face. I hear I like that costumes, I want to be
that next year, that gives them an idea of what they like. It is fun to
costumes a lot of people like to wear costumes.
Some people like to dress up because it is fun and not everyone gets to
dress up so we should be thankful that we have the change to wear a costume.
Sometimes not all of us get to go with your friends on
Halloween. We live at different places.
When we wear them we can show them at school. 95 % would have a smile on their face when they get to
school because they could not wait to put on their costume and show everyone.
I think wearing
our Halloween costume would be good and we would just love you even more
if you did this.
Thank you for your time
Emily Corbett
Persuasive
Writing
Topic: More
primary and junior sports at Coronation
For Coronation public school
Have you ever thought Coronation doesn’t have many
sports for primaries and juniors? This
could be important for primaries and juniors because they might want more
sports to play here. Who knows they could be getting tired of only having dodge
ball, soccer or volley ball to play. I think this is a fantastic idea and the
primaries and juniors at coronation could think so too.
Coronation needs more sports for juniors and Primary’s
to play, especially primary’s because they need to be more active like the
intermediates here at this school. It seems like to me that intermediates get
more sports and are more active than any other child in the school because they
have more sports than any other division. Juniors should be able play more
sports, dodge ball at lunch like the Primary’s do, football, flag football and
more. Primaries should be able to play more sports, volleyball, soccer,
football and more.
On this topic I think we should also have more
teachers to teach and run the sports at coronation. Here it is the almost the same four or six teachers teaching each sport, we
need other teachers to run these sports so we can have more sports. For example
we can have Mr. Durning and Mr. Ferguson teach basketball, Ms. Simpson and Ms.
Mattin teach volleyball and so on for other teachers and sports. My opinion is
we should have two teachers running each sport and have more than only the same
six to four teachers teaching the sports.
People at Coronation should give more thought to
having more, better or newer sports here at the school. Just because juniors
and primaries are younger than the intermediates it does not mean they get to
play less sports than the bigger division, that means that they should get the
same amount of sports or more than that and every division should get the same
sports as each other so everyone can be as healthy as they need to be.
In conclusion it is a fantastic idea that we need more
primary and junior sports for here at Coronation. If we get more primary and
junior sports here at Coronation then the kids here could stay healthy, be
active and have fun. That is why we should have more primary and junior at
Coronation.
Persuasive Writing
Centers in gym
by Grace
Students
should get to do centers have you done
centers before if you did? Did you like it? Think if you had fun don’t you
think kids can get to do that to? I love centers in gym class it was so much
fun :)!!! I totally think kids should stay active by running and doing centers
If we do more centers in gym kids can learn to
play more sports and do more things. Kids get overweight if they don’t get
enough exercise, we can prevent this by schools setting up centers including
the following jump rope, basketball, workout, volleyball, scoops. We did this a
couple of times and it was fun. On Friday October 24 2014 we did centers and
the things we did were basketball, volley ball, badminton, skipping ropes and
scoops. The sports you put in can help the kids with outside of school sports.
The kids will do better outside of school and parents don’t you want your kids
to do better and enjoy the sports you paid money for?
Lots of kids hate running because it is hard work
for them, problem is they don’t run or exercise enough then running hurts them.
I think we should do laps in gym before anything it will build leg muscles so
they can run. There are very few people who run a lot in my class; it makes
playing man hunt not as fun as I could be but it is what it is. I try to run as
much as I can but sometimes I forget. Kids also don’t like running because it
tiers them out if you do it more then it won’t tier you out so much, you will
still get tired because your muscles are working a lot but you should still
run. If you don’t get active other kids can make fun of you and not let you
play certain games like manhunt or soccer or tag/freezetag.it will make kids
more energized and in a better mood, now don’t you want you kids and students
to be happy and always have a smile on their face. You should encourage kids to
be happy and active, when kids are happy they can focus better on other work
and assignments and if they focus better that means better grades and happier
parents and for the teachers no angry comments only happy comments.
There are so many possible things you can put out,
some of those things people will love and put their best effort but some things
people will hate and won’t try, if you don’t try you will do lousy if you try
you will do better. Sometimes teachers may put out mats for push-ups and sit
ups or crunches burpeys and much more, you should not think it’s a punishment
it is not they are just trying to get you in shape so you can do games of man
hunt or basketball or maybe even doge
ball for example I think some kids like basketball or volley ball and some gym
teachers don’t do centers so that the can practice those sports. You can teach
those sports as a center to. That’s what most teachers don’t know, the teachers
don’t know that the students are still learning that particular sport but are
also learning many other skills. The students enjoy the centers more than
learning one thing at a time
I think it is a great idea to do centers because
the kids will get better physical education. The teachers can also make the
kids do laps so they become better runners.
That’s why I think doing centers is a good idea, kids should be allowed
to run around and do a lot more and centers provide that for them. You want
your kids to enjoy gym so they can get a better grade in gym. Your kids will
come back with a smile and tell you all about their day.
Persuasive Writing
Heaven-Leigh
Topic: Dogs
Have you ever walked your dog? Well some
people are considering to not letting dogs into
some parks and places.
Dogs should be able to go anywhere
they want because the owner always have a hold of the dog and the dog is
always under control .People don’t need
to worry because most dogs are not aggressive or rough so most of them are not harmful. Many dogs are very
nice and gentle.
Dogs are just like humans they need
to walk too so if people are not letting dogs walk to some parks and places it
is not fair at all because dogs should be able to walk many places and parks.
Most dogs are very nice and would not think of harming people
Most people are kicking dogs out of
parks because they scare some kids but most of kids love dogs. And if there is
a couple of aggressive dogs then the owner would tell the children to not pet
the dog and the dog could not get of the leash or harness so if there is a
aggressive dog I could not hurt any people. People should be able to walk their
dogs at parks.
I think letting dogs in some parks is
a very great idea. And most dogs are very nice. And people do not need to worry
about where they can walk there dog because people should have the right to
walk their dog where ever and whenever they want.